tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post787608992771480043..comments2023-12-30T20:35:39.441-06:00Comments on On Literary Intent: Teaser Tuesday Lucky 7K.A. Stewarthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00926336938605410096noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-18563495470916258922009-06-09T20:17:21.108-05:002009-06-09T20:17:21.108-05:00Intriguing...love the detailed description.
Rando...Intriguing...love the detailed description.<br /><br />Random non PC thought. When I first started the clip - I was thinking Indian woman from India. Then from the context got Native American. Not sure how to clarify that for your readers without it being too weird. Good job! trickywooAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-23457058925734469932009-06-09T18:46:30.022-05:002009-06-09T18:46:30.022-05:00I like how easily it flows. Your style is very rea...I like how easily it flows. Your style is very readable and the imagery vivid. I'm very curious about the characters!Julianne Douglashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10190332417986785920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-46512739443962629402009-06-09T17:07:34.381-05:002009-06-09T17:07:34.381-05:00Not the dream of a good day, lol. Giants are scary...Not the dream of a good day, lol. Giants are scary.Rising Starhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12812633174502063870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-10626153989545670002009-06-09T16:06:33.175-05:002009-06-09T16:06:33.175-05:00YOWZA! You are such a gorgeous writer and this pas...YOWZA! You are such a gorgeous writer and this passage was awesome. Loved it!!Courtney Allison Moultonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18385987970902585442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-48814601132685847942009-06-09T15:16:44.922-05:002009-06-09T15:16:44.922-05:00Addictive reading - excellent description, as has ...Addictive reading - excellent description, as has been said.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06589125418574916299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-26533329896599835432009-06-09T15:11:25.441-05:002009-06-09T15:11:25.441-05:00Oh, I want to read more. Love it.Oh, I want to read more. Love it.Rose Presseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15838717160840786213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-78503409161537662982009-06-09T13:18:31.520-05:002009-06-09T13:18:31.520-05:00I love the lyricism in the vision sequence. But o...I love the lyricism in the vision sequence. But of course all of your writing is heavy on the gorgeous.<br /><br />And I think I might have a crush on Caleb. Just a little. :DGretchenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09327185025020171674noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-11108015962495574402009-06-09T10:00:48.357-05:002009-06-09T10:00:48.357-05:00Such wonderful, strong imagery in this. Your descr...Such wonderful, strong imagery in this. Your description is so vivid.sunnahttp://amybai.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-58770219577623104522009-06-09T09:40:29.575-05:002009-06-09T09:40:29.575-05:00Frigging awesome!
Your description of the sleeping...Frigging awesome!<br />Your description of the sleeping giant and the consequence of it shifting in its sleep...fantastic. I was really swept into this piece. Plus, I love the whole Native American thing that's going on.<br /><br />I want to read more!sue laybournhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14549268075528924978noreply@blogger.com