tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post1621645066553559126..comments2023-12-30T20:35:39.441-06:00Comments on On Literary Intent: Teaser Tuesday the big 1-0K.A. Stewarthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00926336938605410096noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-21719819523490268702009-07-28T21:07:07.989-05:002009-07-28T21:07:07.989-05:00OMG! I SOOO loved reading this!!! And I though M...OMG! I SOOO loved reading this!!! And I though MY goddesses were bad! (Will post an example later, hehehehe)<br /><br />I can't add anything, only echo what everyone else has said!<br /><br />awesome and amazing job!!!J.F. Posthumushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17033765098660171013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-67644752496916563672009-07-28T18:47:16.819-05:002009-07-28T18:47:16.819-05:00Thanks for reading, everyone! And welcome to my n...Thanks for reading, everyone! And welcome to my new blog visitors!K.A. Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00926336938605410096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-31472862544947430962009-07-28T16:36:41.856-05:002009-07-28T16:36:41.856-05:00Holy cow. (Er, no pun intended.) This is barbaric ...Holy cow. (Er, no pun intended.) This is barbaric and mesmerizing. I can't IMAGINE what the context must be like. Well done.Elizabeth Loupashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529637737481928066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-50753210163923510722009-07-28T16:14:38.181-05:002009-07-28T16:14:38.181-05:00I really admire your writing - so vivid, I can rea...I really admire your writing - so vivid, I can really see every detail unfolding and you do it without putting in too much or too little. Such a nice balance of action, dialogue and narrative as well. Great work, a powerful scene (I could feel my own stomach turning) I would love to read more :)Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09521315180241354286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-41689126685670498422009-07-28T15:55:12.798-05:002009-07-28T15:55:12.798-05:00Great writing. Loved the descriptions.Great writing. Loved the descriptions.Rose Presseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15838717160840786213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-49401569022270993202009-07-28T15:53:39.344-05:002009-07-28T15:53:39.344-05:00OMG, talk about creepy! I was totally stunned whe...OMG, talk about creepy! I was totally stunned when the hounds got unleashed on the poor calf. *shudder* Very dark and gruesome--and it definitely lets you know exactly what Artemis is all about. Awesome stuff (even if I will have nightmares now, lol)Debra Drizahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15750912933889904216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-41239005000177089772009-07-28T15:10:15.928-05:002009-07-28T15:10:15.928-05:00Whoa! Very dark and primal. I loved the gunshot ...Whoa! Very dark and primal. I loved the gunshot line and the pairing of sexuality with the violence. (It just ups the creepiness factor.) Good job!Jan O'Hara (Tartitude)https://www.blogger.com/profile/04930129153455367820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-60455997861752733912009-07-28T14:56:30.221-05:002009-07-28T14:56:30.221-05:00Great Scene! Did you do a lot of hellenistic resea...Great Scene! Did you do a lot of hellenistic research for this story? It's good.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10228310208211135706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-12062406327401490632009-07-28T14:29:47.627-05:002009-07-28T14:29:47.627-05:00Cool, Kari. Makes total sense. Great scene.Cool, Kari. Makes total sense. Great scene.Steven Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05891598188156163954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-26484921971772078422009-07-28T13:38:03.876-05:002009-07-28T13:38:03.876-05:00Steve - This is actually my dark steampunk piece. ...Steve - This is actually my dark steampunk piece. It makes more sense in context. ;)K.A. Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00926336938605410096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-12972339384725589502009-07-28T13:26:39.848-05:002009-07-28T13:26:39.848-05:00WOW!
My heart was pounding by the end of that! G...WOW! <br /><br />My heart was pounding by the end of that! Great job!Lee Brosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16480706639508135353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-70723579725066594152009-07-28T13:26:10.795-05:002009-07-28T13:26:10.795-05:00Wow...just...wow.
Incredible imagery and horror. M...Wow...just...wow.<br />Incredible imagery and horror. My jaw is hanging open here. Having watched a few werewolf movies, I always wondered why people howled in pain during the transformation, now I know. It had never even occurred to me.<br />That was a truly horrific scene and I absolutely love it.sue laybournhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14549268075528924978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-85278399266866921722009-07-28T13:24:58.089-05:002009-07-28T13:24:58.089-05:00Wow! Great scene. I love Greco-Roman mythology. Ar...Wow! Great scene. I love Greco-Roman mythology. Artemis definately put that lout into place. Very descriptive. <br /><br />One note though, what era is this taking place? I only ask because you use the word gunshot in a description and it seems anachronistic if the story takes place in antiquity.Steven Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05891598188156163954noreply@blogger.com