tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post3826018605969490656..comments2023-12-30T20:35:39.441-06:00Comments on On Literary Intent: Teaser Tuesday CatorceK.A. Stewarthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00926336938605410096noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-54817642157901545692010-01-27T23:37:11.320-06:002010-01-27T23:37:11.320-06:00The voice sounds way too female, not male at all!The voice sounds way too female, not male at all!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-78896281260815656262010-01-12T22:10:01.526-06:002010-01-12T22:10:01.526-06:00I totally remember you mentioning this SNI in Purg...I totally remember you mentioning this SNI in Purgy--and yes, you definitely most go back and finish it! Awesome opening--Don-the-Dick--Bwahaha! Plus, I love the line about how the closest he gets to friends are people he doesn't want to punch in the teeth! :)<br /><br />Great snip!houndrathttp://www.houndrat.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-57974239036013763442010-01-12T20:54:21.898-06:002010-01-12T20:54:21.898-06:00You have a great voice and I second ink - the surr...You have a great voice and I second ink - the surrealism definitely worked for me, hope to see more of it soon!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-17400137193120380602010-01-12T19:51:55.885-06:002010-01-12T19:51:55.885-06:00Ooh, I think I remember you mentioning wanting to ...Ooh, I think I remember you mentioning wanting to write a novel around this topic/song before. Excellent voice, and when the woman shows up it really does take on a dream-like surreal quality.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-7588796082764421222010-01-12T18:20:31.404-06:002010-01-12T18:20:31.404-06:00Any story that starts with Don-the-Dick is brillia...Any story that starts with Don-the-Dick is brilliant. And the female character's description reminded me a lot of a certain vampire from your past I used to know once upon a time.BeshterBookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08507678180838211734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3347224557345852583.post-25435017778895667722010-01-12T17:33:15.040-06:002010-01-12T17:33:15.040-06:00Yup, I think you need to center a book around this...Yup, I think you need to center a book around this one. Isn't this the dream you had a few weeks back?<br /><br />I like it. I love how well you get into a man's head. It really works for me.sue laybournhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14549268075528924978noreply@blogger.com